yup, right. the guitar-driven Alternative genre isn't really my thing, but i'd love to try ^_^ i guess this is my best Alternative song as compared to my old "attempts" ^_^ and of course i couldn't go all out Alternative so i added a little personal touch, thus resulting in the weirdo verse with a reggae-like bass line (hahaha, sorry can't help it), and that syncopated beat i love messin around with ^_^ but the chorus in general sounds like the typical alternative rock-type i think. anyway.. this genre isnt really in my expertise, im just experimenting around ^_^ so i'd really appreciate the feedback ^_^
i was waiting up for my sister to come home when i started to play around some guitar riffs to kill time. that was around 12am. by around 3:55am i completed the music. by 4:31am i finished writing the lyrics, by 6:30am i finished the vocal recording ^_^ i think i finished everything in a matter of 6 hours, thats a pretty good record for me ^_^ anyway, hope u like it!
More Than Ordinary
by ioHann
(9/29/07, 4:31-6:30am)
1
what i would give to see the world through your eyes
so many things you know that they dont realize
a beautiful masterpiece
is all that i see
too great to fathom
i could get down on my knees
and i
(chorus)
i see you
amidst the bustling crowd
in my eyes, you're the champion
and you make me proud
you're truly amazing
in every little way
and you're more than ordinary to me
2
its such a pity for the world to pass you by
coz everyone who does would miss half their life
if only they knew the truth
they'd want to be with you
coz even angels know their place
when they see your face
(chorus 2)
i see you
amidst the bustling crowd
in my eyes, you're the champion
and you make me proud
you're truly amazing
in every little way
and you're more than ordinary to me
and i see you like a diamond under light
i see you like the sun shining bright
you're so amazing
every single way
and you're more than ordinary to me
(bridge)
i see you like a diamond under light
i see you like the sun shining bright
you're so amazing
every single way
you're so amazing
every single day
you're so amazing
even angels know their place
you're more than ordinary to me
to me
(chorus)
well you def. don't sound like u've lost sleep. hahaha. but yea dude, the chorus is purdy catchy.. especially that last line. :-) verse sounds a lil RNB'ish though.. then again, i can see where that's coming from. ;-) 
